Pare1 引出现象+自我观点
Pare2 中心句+论证细节(举例子)
Pare3 总结论证+自我结论
communication in the digital age
数字时代的沟通方式
Pare1 引出现象+自我观点
Good morning, everyone. I am very glad to be here to give a short speech. Today my topic is communication in the digital age. (引出现象 XXX是毫无疑问的+从句(客观事实))It is universally acknowledged that communication in the digital age is ubiquitous (adj. 无所不在的;普遍存在的) in our lives. (自我观点)In my opinion, communication in the digital age has both advantages and disadvantages.
大家早上好。我很高兴能在这里作简短的发言。今天,我的主题是数字时代的沟通方式。人们普遍认为,数字时代的沟通方式在我们的生活中是无处不在的,我认为,数字时代的沟通方式既有优点也有缺点。
第一段:明确演讲主题后直接套模板
Good morning, everyone. I am very glad to be here to give a short speech. Today my topic is+演讲主题。It is universally acknowledged that +一个描述主题的从句。 In my opinion, XXX(演讲主题) has both advantages and disadvantages.
大家早上好。我很高兴能在这里作简短的发言。今天,我的主题是XXX。人们普遍认为,XXX在我们的生活中是无处不在的,我认为,XXX既有优点,也有缺点。
Pare1引出现象 XXX是毫无疑问的+从句(客观事实)适用句型如下
(1)It is apparent / obvious that +从句
(2)It is universally acknowledged that +从句
(3)It is generally accepted that +从句
Pare2 中心句+论证细节(举例子)
(中心句)Communication in the digital age is a double-edged sword.It brings convenience to our life but also contains harm. (论证细节,举例子,以小见大)For example, we use wechat(微信) in our daily life. It provides us with a lot of convenience in life and work.(优点) Wechat not only shortens people's distance, but also makes people's communication more convenient. Meanwhile, the function of wechat circle of friends makes our world more colorful. By contrast, (转折词)Wechat also has many security risks.(缺点)Our personal security information cannot be guaranteed. When I was 18 years old, I was cheated 1000disclosure of my personal information.(现实生活中普遍存在的问题,最好以自我亲身经历为例,更具有真实性)
数字时代的沟通方式是一把双刃剑。它给我们的生活带来方便的同时也包含着伤害。例如,我们在日常生活中使用微信。它为我们的生活和工作提供了很多便利。微信不仅缩短了人们之间的距离,而且使人们的交流更加方便。同时,微信朋友圈的功能使我们的世界更加丰富多彩。相比之下,微信也有很多安全风险,我们的个人安全信息无法得到保证。当我18岁的时候,由于个人信息的泄露,我在微信上被骗了1000元。
第二段:更多的是关于平时自我积累的素材,但也有迹可寻。
XXX is a double-edged sword.It brings.It brings convenience to our life but also contains harm. For example, , (举例子,最好是举平时生活中大家都知道的例子)+优点和缺点的论证。
注意:在描述其同一点时,要注意其一个递进的关系,常用的递进词有:Moreover/Besides/ What is more/ Meanwhile。同时优点和缺点之间的连接要有转折词。如:Conversely/On the contrary/By contrast
Pare3 总结论证+自我结论
So, as communication in the age of data continues to evolve, it has brought us both convenience and security risks. But overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, when we use various apps, we should pay more attention to protect our personal information. This is the end of my speech, thank you for your listening.
因此,随着数据时代的沟通方式不断发展,它给我们带来了便利和安全风险。但总的来说,优势大于劣势。因此,当我们使用各种应用程序时,我们应该更加注意保护我们的个人信息。我的演讲到结束,谢谢大家的聆听。
第三段:根据上述举的例子总结一句话。(就是点明它既有好处也有坏处)然后再说明其中的一个利弊关系(是利大于弊还是弊大于利)。最后,再回归到我们个人怎么做的一个问题。
利弊关系的表达:
But overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.(利大于弊)
But overall, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.(弊大于利)